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Reviews For: Queen of the Forest

breaker-one
2003-07-28
ch 1,
abuseI liked the story a lot, but I think you could have expanded more on it. The ending seemed kind of misplaced since there wasn't a lot of build up to it through the plot and the characters. More chapters and a longer plot line would definatly improve this already great piece of work.
Della C
2003-07-17
ch 1,
abuseInteresting characters. But it's almost as if it ended too soon and too randomly. Your characters were BEAUTIFULLY created, but there wasn't quite enough set-up.
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