|Reviews for Broken|
| GoldMetalGymnast 6/15/04 . chapter 1
again, great! this one shows wonderful emotion, and so much better then how i tried to express my feelins in that term :)
| Bamboti 12/19/03 . chapter 1
neat how you use metaphors throught the poem. love it.
| joie 610 8/3/03 . chapter 1
interesting, dark, sad poem. you did good :) heh, yep. but i think that rain not only symbolizes "a tear or one's pain" but maybe also a cleansing or something. cool poem.
| wildtenderness 7/31/03 . chapter 1
| Free-Writer 7/16/03 . chapter 1
Great! I love the imagery in this poem!
| Smarie 7/14/03 . chapter 1
ahh great poem...I would like to thank you for reviewing my poems... :o)
I hope you never run out of inspiration!
| tinybuterfly 7/14/03 . chapter 1
You show much feeling in your writings...keep it up!
| Anich 7/12/03 . chapter 1
thats definatly me
| not sure yet 7/12/03 . chapter 1
very sad and heartfelt poem, fairly well written, muchly enjoyed this one, love the part about the rain, excellent job
| lebuffle 7/12/03 . chapter 1
Wow... really touching. Everybody feels like that sometimes. And it hurts. You've portrayed that very well. Beautiful.
| Keep it 100 7/11/03 . chapter 1
Great flow and form. It was really effective to start each stanza in each a similar manner. You also got your emotions across flawlessly.
Heart of the Sword
| Falling Stars 7/11/03 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really good. I really like it because I feel like that a lot... But anyways, good work!
| Fit of Destiny 7/11/03 . chapter 1
So sad, but I love it. This is one of those poems anyone can relate too. Sounds like something that should go on a bookmark ;)
| DefianceIsMe 7/11/03 . chapter 1
I feel broken as well...to a million pieces smaller than a grain of sand...impossible to put back together...anyways. Great job on the piece. _