again, great! this one shows wonderful emotion, and so much better then how i tried to express my feelins in that term :)

neat how you use metaphors throught the poem. love it.
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interesting, dark, sad poem. you did good :) heh, yep. but i think that rain not only symbolizes "a tear or one's pain" but maybe also a cleansing or something. cool poem.

beautifully written!

Great! I love the imagery in this poem!

ahh great poem...I would like to thank you for reviewing my poems... :o)

I hope you never run out of inspiration!

You show much feeling in your writings...keep it up!

thats definatly me

great job

very sad and heartfelt poem, fairly well written, muchly enjoyed this one, love the part about the rain, excellent job

Wow... really touching. Everybody feels like that sometimes. And it hurts. You've portrayed that very well. Beautiful.

Great flow and form. It was really effective to start each stanza in each a similar manner. You also got your emotions across flawlessly.

Heart of the Sword

Wow, this is really good. I really like it because I feel like that a lot... But anyways, good work!

So sad, but I love it. This is one of those poems anyone can relate too. Sounds like something that should go on a bookmark ;)

I feel broken as well...to a million pieces smaller than a grain of sand...impossible to put back together...anyways. Great job on the piece. _