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| Amo il ragazzo 2004-07-16 ch 1,  | abuseThis is very good! It definetely sounds like something Maroon 5 would write, and I absolutely love their songs! I almost started humming a tune for it while I was reading. Great job, and thanks for reviewing mine! |
| Cardinal Chuck 2004-07-15 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, I'm not much of a poem reviewer but I don't have the time to read you're other story and I wanted to return the all the reviews you have given me...that being said. I did enjoy reading this. The chorus was great and I'm sure put to music it would be even more catchy than it is when just read. Also, I liked how it ended just like it began. That's always good for a song. So thanks for your reviews and feel free to keep reading. |
| foolish Foxes 2004-05-26 ch 1, | abuseaw, it's...sorta sad in away I think. "I hope ypour thinking regretting, seeing where you made the mistake," sad. but good. |
| DreamNightmare 2003-10-16 ch 1, | abusethis is pretty good...n u said uve never had ur heart broken? GOOD 4 U!! never let that happencuz it really hurts n it really SUX DreamNightmare |
| Baby Milo 2003-10-08 ch 1, | abuseWOW! That was so god! I really enjoyed reading it!! |
| Twilight Tiger 2003-08-04 ch 1, | abuseNot bad. I haven't had my heart broken either! *gives you a high five*. I like the whole "dent you made" and "unwound lace." Very nice symbolism. I'd like to know the melody that would go with it, stupid FP.com! Great job! |
| Katie 2003-07-27 ch 1, anon. | abusecute! |
| oh-so invisible 2003-07-25 ch 1, | abuseOh.. that's such a good poem.. I love it. That heartbreaker... Thanx for reviewing my story! I'll keep updating! ~W.R.~ |
| pneumothorax 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abusethis was really good. it seems as though there's a lot hidden behind it even if it wasn't meant to look that way: "where you made the mistake where you took when you weren't supossed to take" those lines are -brilliant- and i really loved this poem. very good! Claire. |
| Evening Phantom 2003-07-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseVERY GOOD! THanks for reviewing my story! |
| Furbs 2003-07-11 ch 1, | abuseAll i have to say is Shway. It is very shway. Hopefully your band will sing it. shway |