An interesting, well developed, and wonderful theory! I would love to see what goes on in one of those battles, perhaps recruit some of the dreamers (people) into the fight on their side.

All right gurrly...you wrote this back in freshman year of hs and its now been 5 years since you started it all...how hard is it to keep going? FINISH THIS THING!!

Ok, listen here gurlly...if your gonna be putting this ** up, you best be putting it ALL up! Now, lets go! Chop chop! hurry up! Faster! I WANNA READ IT!

*sigh* I stand by my comment, but I will add onto what I said now that I have read the rest.

Familiarity, brings just that. You lose the surreality that comes with something new, and things become less interesting.

To this comment, I add but one word after 'intriguing', and that is: Surreal.

Ice

I'm hooked on this story. It sounds like it is going to be really good. I can't wait for more!

Intriguing. Keep it up, I'd like to see where this is going.