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| deathsShadow000 2003-07-14 ch 1,  | abuseVery straight forward. You don't really say what drove you into the abyss or did you write it like that on purpose to represent the fact that it could happen to anyone? Chased into the abyss by their own demons. |
| Et Tu Brute 2003-07-13 ch 1, | abusevery good, i like how you apply practical problems (no handholds etc) to an emotional problem |