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| Dirty Wallpaper 2003-08-02 ch 1,  | abusebeing a scary feminist chica, i was very impressed by this poem, it was so strong in its messege and the whole atmosphere was black with "NO". i really cant find anything else to say...for once i hvae nothing to say, let the work rejoice!...kudos, fantastic job, girls around the world should read this poem for inspiration. |
| CoolBeans18s 2003-07-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is wonderful! It flowed, it had great meaning - pure brilliance! I especillay liked the last stanza! ~ CoolBeans18s |
| cosmo-queen 2003-07-15 ch 1, | abuseVery good poem, this was very well-written and it flowed really well. I'm sorry for your break-up. Best wishes :) *cosmo-queen* |
| The Black Rider 2003-07-14 ch 1, | abuseSorry I didn't review this sooner, I've been away for a while. I'm very sorry things didn't work out, though I'm happy for you that you have clearly found the light at the end of the tunnel. Great poem, as always. |
| glitterjewele 2003-07-12 ch 1, | abusefascinating . . . i love how from the very beginning this seems to be a vision cast in gray without your ever mentioning a color. there's also a lot of bleak truth in it ~ the social status in particular stood out to me with this regard. there was a lot of strength in it, which did a lot to drive the meaning/feelings home. i'm sorry about you guys breaking up :(. my favorite lines were: "dark shapes in my head," "left logic for dead," "a persistant conscience/uttered endless pleas," and (the favorite of the favorites) "freedom ensnares me" (because it was quite captivating to think of freedom as holding someone back rather than setting them free). very good job with this, chica. |
| Keep it 100 2003-07-12 ch 1, | abuseI liked how you made this a symbol. ~Heart of the Sword |
| BlackV.Rose aka Wings Of My... 2003-07-12 ch 1, anon. | abuse^__^ Too lazy to sign in lol... very strong, I love that feeling in this poem! ^_^ BlackV.Rose~~ aka ~{Wings}~ |
| CancerianQueen 2003-07-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is great! I love it!! Keep writing, ~Naomi~ |
| teresa7 2003-07-11 ch 1, | abuseim so glad that you finished the race! congratulations and i hope breaking up with your bf doesn't scar you. Fantastic work! ~teresa~ |