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| circumspice 2005-10-04 ch 1,   | Shadow writerReads a shadow poemDecides to leaveA shadow reviewThat poem was greatIt had lots of shadowsIt sure leaves my writingIn the dark. :) |
| Devika-Fay 2005-01-25 ch 1, | lotz of shadows...i couldn't find a line that didn't have shadow in it. you were right..lol. |
| A Fellow Writer 2004-12-30 ch 1, | this is beautiful! this is a very touching story. i love it! i'll be looking out for a book by you! hmm..i don't think the author will be "AutumnDark" though... |
| Larpskendya 2004-03-11 ch 1, | Wow. I am so repeating that word at this moment in time. I'd really like to know what inspired you to write this. Few things move me to extremities but this one did so well done. Wow. |
| Lemons Meringue 2004-03-08 ch 1, | Terrific, I'm envious... |
| Xaara 2004-02-26 ch 1, | I loved the repetition and meter you managed to keep consistent throughout the poem - I can almost imagine a storyteller in front of a fire, starting slowly, then gradually increasing the tempo and volume until the abrupt final line. There aren't any words out of place, and the rhyming and emphasis is entirely natural. Definitely a poem to read aloud. Wonderful work. |
| DIEDELETED 2004-02-09 ch 1, | This thing gets stuck in my head, and Makes me chant! I Love it! |
| Andrala 2003-10-02 ch 1, | My name is Andrala, and I do believe I shall join this site soon. I am on fanfiction.net... this was an excellent poem... my love for this cannot be correctly expressed in the time I have alotted... i'm, in a way, sort of a dark person when it come to poetry and music, i blame the whole "Bubble-gum pop" thing that occured a few years ago, and sadly, i was part of the fandom... then i "grew up" (? hah-hah, i'm only 14...) anyway, great job, loved it to peices. ~Andrala~ |
| elise 2003-09-20 ch 1, | This is a very good poem/story. Your macabre imagery is lovely. keep up the good work. |
| Ethelflaed 2003-09-15 ch 1, | (blink blink) Coolness. That isn't a word. It's slang. Bad Flaed, bad! Okay, let's see. Shadowness! -.- NO, Flaed. Kind-of-strange-but-really-haunting-in-a-confusing-wayness! I liked it. |
| Paint It Black 2003-08-07 ch 1, | This is beautiful. Breathtaking. The way you've created something so wide and powerful around one word is amazing. I adore this poem. |
| MaskedCoconut 2003-07-30 ch 1, | She sounds very... alone, a very hardened person, on the outside at least. I thought that the repeating of the word 'shadow' would get annoying, but it didn't. It just fit into every line. The poem has a really strong rhythm. It was great-- keep it up. |
| the all powerful magnificen... 2003-07-25 ch 1, | Me being the freak I happily am I checked. No line without shadow in it. |
| BklynQueenie 2003-07-24 ch 1, | Wow, that was some poem...loved the reacuring 'shadow', it really added to the tune of the poem. |
| CCLD-Blade 2003-07-20 ch 1, | Nice stuff, nice stuff. Keep it up! |