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swift sky silver 2003-07-20 . chapter 1
aw, now i'm depressed. this was very well written=0)
Arynnl 2003-07-17 . chapter 1
that is a beautiful and sad poem,
sniff sniff
imkandiluvme 2003-07-15 . chapter 1
you're a very deep person. thats cool.
Toad-Frog 2003-07-12 . chapter 1
Awesome job! Thanks for the reviews.
zelle 2003-07-12 . chapter 1
m...deep and dark like the space between stars where constellations hover in waiting. Yup. About sums up what I felt when I read this poem. Absolutely marvellous stuff! It flows with smooth and cool-like snakeskin rhythm.

gah, see? Now you got me in the nice and dark little place i like to call my poetic corner.

"But at my time of conception
I was lacking a voice." *shivers* so good!

I am humbled by the depth of this poem. You, dear, are talented and don't you dare think otherwise!

*goes to read more*
Stoffpferd 2003-07-12 . chapter 1
Oh, I can't describe how much I loved the depth within this marvelous poem.
"It's like there's never enough roots
To soak up the rain."
Wow, just wow! I wish there'd exist a word to describe your talent. This poem sums it all up, breath-taking and powerful! Amazing!

~Stoffpferd~
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