 swift sky silver 2003-07-20 . chapter 1aw, now i'm depressed. this was very well written=0) |
 Arynnl 2003-07-17 . chapter 1that is a beautiful and sad poem,
sniff sniff |
 imkandiluvme 2003-07-15 . chapter 1you're a very deep person. thats cool. |
 Toad-Frog 2003-07-12 . chapter 1Awesome job! Thanks for the reviews. |
 zelle 2003-07-12 . chapter 1m...deep and dark like the space between stars where constellations hover in waiting. Yup. About sums up what I felt when I read this poem. Absolutely marvellous stuff! It flows with smooth and cool-like snakeskin rhythm.
gah, see? Now you got me in the nice and dark little place i like to call my poetic corner.
"But at my time of conception
I was lacking a voice." *shivers* so good!
I am humbled by the depth of this poem. You, dear, are talented and don't you dare think otherwise!
*goes to read more* |
 Stoffpferd 2003-07-12 . chapter 1Oh, I can't describe how much I loved the depth within this marvelous poem.
"It's like there's never enough roots
To soak up the rain."
Wow, just wow! I wish there'd exist a word to describe your talent. This poem sums it all up, breath-taking and powerful! Amazing!
~Stoffpferd~ |