i cant express just how much i like this! im in awe!! good job!! check out sum of my stuff ur opinion wud mean alot! xx

Whoa, tha's really deep... your rhyming and time is really well written. the wide discriptive vocabulary keeps it really intersting. keep up the good work!! can't wait to read more! i'd love to hear your thoughts on some of my stuff, if you wouldn't mind reading some.. thanks :D!

All of your work is amazingly well done, you don't force your rhimes and everything flows beautifully! Keep on writing and I will keep on reading!

~Mallroy

this is really good, i like it, it has great rhyming and flowes really well.

about my song, it would be a rock type song, kinda like evanescence, but then again i was listening to liknin park when i came up with it.

I like this one as well. ' trusting all that is in doubt,' that's a really strong line. It's well written as well.
~ Stevie

great mental imagary in this one, good job. ur good at writing...hehe...yay! srry it took me so long to review. anyways, another good one

Hey ya, thanks for your review, and you asked me to check some of your work and wow it's brilliant, there is alot of very strong mental imagery. This song is beautifuly structured and well put together and meaningful rhymes. It feels like it has a very slow dramatic rythm to it, well it does in my head anyway, prehaps a nice piano piece over the top to emphasisie the imagery, well well done to a great song
I rate this song: 9.1/10

Oh wow...
I dunno what else to say! That was just...wow!
Sorry antway please write more i'll look out for your stuff.
Luv
Pre

that was beutiful, with shades of overlying darkness and forgotten lust. i love the stanza about running to the sea.
absoultly wonderful.

When u write, u sound so Shakespherean. You're writting is good, but you're so sad in them. Anyway, ur way cool. Keep up the good work. Write more. I'd like to see a piece of romantic work from you. Write it,a nd let me know!

This is really beautiful, I absolutely adore your poems...please write more, I'm waiting! ;D

-Sam-

i have nothing more to say than to say that if u keep writing, u're probably going to unlock the secret to my painful past. take this as a good comment and a warning. but still, i aplaude you.

wow. That's real good. Thanks for all my reviews but your stuff is still way better! Catch you after practise and i'll say hw good it is all over!

wow I really loved this