Wow, I love it! The lumps in the oatmeal and the shadows in sunlight thing is amazing...how do you come up with it?

i love your style. the simple way you describe everything and the very effective and vivid use of imagery. you are an awesome poet and definitely going on author alert and fav authors. i cant wait to read the rest of your stuff.

I love this one! Especially the ending...wow! This is going on my favorite's list. More people should read your stuff!

Keep writing!

Namir Swiftpaw

i like this, i think i qualify as a sometime angel. : )

keep writing.

selah

This is quite innovative... Awesome job!