   scribbler-pie 2007-01-15 . chapter 6aw thats so sad >. |
| scribbler-pie 2007-01-15 . chapter 5 so he has an obsession with eyes? |
| scribbler-pie 2007-01-15 . chapter 4 a change eh? wounder how this will turn out. |
| scribbler-pie 2007-01-15 . chapter 3 he has some serious brain problems. your a really good author keep it up! |
| scribbler-pie 2007-01-15 . chapter 2 excited for the next chapter! |
| scribbler-pie 2007-01-15 . chapter 1 a wife? didn't see that comming |
 zagato 2003-11-02 . chapter 7I don't think he should have left the body in his house. He's really getting soft. Anyway, it seems inevitable that he will kill his own family. He is sick after all. Please update. |
 SpawnMeister666 2003-09-11 . chapter 7This is great. Wonderful even!! Or as an old English TV personality might say...fandabidozy!! Or something like that!!
The best thing I've read in ages, and I'm looking forward to you updating soon so I can find out what happens next!
Spawny |
 DevilDragon of Pain 2003-09-09 . chapter 6Nice job. This was certainly a short, but interesting chapter. Make the next one a bit longer, and I think we've got ourselves a winner here folks! I can't WAIT to see what happens now.
SCORE: 9/10
The Critic,
Devildragon of Pain |
| DevilDragon of Pain 2003-07-28 . chapter 4 This is a gripping tale! Please continue with it soon. I usually don't like stories like this, but...you make it interesting.
SCORE: 8/10
The Critic,
Devildragon of Pain |
 Hasan Abood 2003-07-13 . chapter 3The novel is getting better and better. |
| Hasan Abood 2003-07-13 . chapter 1 Nice start! |
| Hasan Abood 2003-07-13 . chapter 2 Yikes! Creepy! good description! |
 theWhiteFeather 2003-07-12 . chapter 1hehe...I'll be the first reviewer for this story!! I like it so far. It's kinda confusing though...so he just kills people..? For what reasons? The descriptions are very nice! I like! Continue! |
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