Loved it!

I'm going to have to check out your other stories with these characters _

This story was really good and entertaining, but it was a little rushed in some parts. I think that Noah and Sierra got together too fast and fell in love too fast. I think it would have been better if you had them hate each other for a little longer, it would have added a lot more sexual tension. Them getting together almost immediately after they reunited to work on the case (even though they were suppose to hate each other) and then falling in love a short time after sleeping together was a bit too unrealistic for me. I found it hard to really get into that side of the story because it seemed that the stages in their relationship happened a bit too fast so you never really got a good chance for that to sink in. It's not really a problem and it doesn't really take away from how good the story is. I would have liked it if you had put more stuff in between the main parts in the story like them getting together, falling in love and then killing Townsend. Also, I found the ending (where he tells her about his past, they fight, they reunite and get married) very rushed and a bit out of place. If she was going to find out about his family and they were going to have a big falling out, it would have been best if that was before they caught the killer. I found that whole section didn’t really fit the rest of the story and parts of it were a bit confusing. It wasn’t given the right execution, it seemed like you just threw it in there as an afterthought. I felt that there were quite a few things you could have done with that. I guess that part just kind of bothered me. I really hope I haven’t offended you with my review, these are just my opinions and suggestions. I still really enjoyed your story and like I mentioned earlier it was very entertaining to read. Not many people can write a good suspense/romance story. I think you are a very talented writer. This story is going into my favourites and I will definitely be checking out your other stories. I’m really interested in Vials of Blood, BloodStreaked and Tears of Blood. There is much more I would like to say about your story (mostly all positive) but then this review would take you years to finish reading. Once again I am really sorry if you are offended by my review, I do not mean for it to come off as insulting or as a flame since I did really like your story and I wish you luck with all your future stories.

i have a question, u didn't explain how did sierra help nikolas?

I love Sierra.

Second time reading this story. :)

bloody fantastic ending!

yay! its going to be cole!

btw- plz let the bastard die... :D

altho i know im kinda delayed, im keepin my fingers crossed for da next story to be coles. pretty plz.

LOL

how embarsng

That sounds incredibly messed up and intriguing.

AW

I seriously want to hug something now.

WHAT!

okay.

It's awesome that your stories are connected.

I should have read Vials of Blood first, hm?

HOLY

SHIT!

WHOA. Good twist with the chocolates...

Ooh, that's interesting.

Yay, I adore your characters!