Great description! I can't wait to read more!
from fawny

Excellent! I'm going to go read more!
from fawny

Agh! Sorry, I fixerd this (6th) chapter!

Umm, I think something went wrong with your upload. There's only three lines here.

o, a few mysteries in this chapter. Who is the strange girl, and what was that vision? We're definately getting into something now. Keep up the great work!

Great chapter! I love how you make it so tranquil and peaceful. It makes it all flow together really well, and is really enjoyable to read. I look forward to more!

Great chapter! I love the wind stone. It's very cool. Keep writing! You're doing a great job!

hey! this is a really good story so far! Really creative idea! very intersting! i like your use of description.. nice touch!
Looking forward 2 reading the rest!
~Aisatsana
Please review my work! i could really use sum feedback!Thanx!

Great story!
the way your characters are announced truly allows the story to flow. liked the setting very much.
I wonder what's gonna happen next?
Update soon?

^_^

Wow! I love this story! You've done an excellent job with it so far, and I hope you continue. Everything has been really well described and written, and I would really like to read more. Well done!

All the characters are so beliable and th wowrld and the names and the language. Everything is so exotic and beautifully written. Your writing style is so unique and i love it. keep up the excellent work. I cant think of anything to say that would make this better, but could you please update soon, because i really want to read the rest! From a newly devoted reader.

Oh. My. Gosh.
This is so good! At the beginning i was already thinking of what i was going to say in this review and at first i wasgoing to tell you al;l my fave parts, but there are way too many! Words cannot describe. Keep up the excellent work.
And yet again, Oh My Gosh!

P.S Thanx for all the reviews as you totally made my day! =)=)=)

Hey!Keep update soon
Plz read mine

Well Greenbug...you have a most vivid imagination and a deft pen at describing the things you see...very interesting...a 200 year long chilhood, quite an idea...I noticed on your page some authors you mentioned, or books...have you read about the Dragons of Pern? If you have not read Anne Mccaffreu you might enjoy her work...very good work... you write very well...regards...amicus

Wow. I've been reading a couple of the things you've posted, and I'm liking it. Your stuff is really well written, and I love the characters and ideas.
Keep it up!