I like this poem...short and sweet just like life...and our life...are like flowers...and flowers wither away and die..as do we...

wonderfully done, short and to the point. There is only one tiny thing I'd change, in the last line the "don't" I'd simply change to do not, otherwise the flow is thrown off a little bit. The silent tears are the worst ones to cry *sigh*.

nice work, keep it up.

-Tormented Romantic

i know the feeling

ARGH! Those damn silent tears! *stab, stab, stab, kill, kill, kill* ... Yes, I know I'm in a weird mood tonight...

Lovely! I like it very much and it has such truth to it! Plz RR some of my

things when you have time. Bye bye!