I haven't been on here in a while, but you were one of the first authors I thought of and when I looked over your work I realized I hadn't read this. It's really good! You should write more poetry. I really love how all the lines before "The invisible girl" lines end in invisible. That really brings the entire poem together and makes it very touching. Don't stop writing poetry!

What's wrong with that guy? Does he even know how to appreciate? Or he doesn't know the word?

Gah, you really got me. It's so...real.

I felt the lines, the pains and all.

Good job.

i feel bad for this girl, which is good because this poem feels real and alive!! good job!

i like it...and u rock too...lol

aw that was so sad!! I like how you ended the poem and my favorite part was the "I look into his eyes, he looks through me"... just wow- great imagery. Thanks so much for the reviews, I'm at the library, but I will read more when I have time-- in the mean while write on! ^^

aw...why your one and ONLY attempt at poetry? i'd read more of this stuff.
good poem. very realistic. i've been in a situation like this once. or maybe twice. okay, maybe a little bit more than twice...
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~Froggie0~

I enjoyed your try at poetry on this. I write some poetry myself. It is pretty good.
My one and only poem at the moment is yet to be completed until I figure out how to edit.

Oh my gosh, this is a great poem! Its excellent! I understand exactly what this poem is talking about. Bravo! U should write another!

i can really relate to this one. It seems so emotional, like u really meant it. you kept it nice and simple and sweet, which is also important. I really really do like this one, I don't normally find poems i really like, but this i really love.

That's sad!