Hmm...this is really good. Has sorta poetic feel to it. You know, a story, but feels like a poem. Different from fanfiction, but still - its a unique style.

please do more of this! it is very good!

Hey, it's me! ^_^ Kitty.

Good first chapter, I see you've finally finished it.

Is Ky still in? Wondering. Because I might finish that little paragraph thingy I have. >.O

As I said, good chapter. Can't wait to see more.

I hope you'll write the next chapter soon.

Your story is very nice and I would love to learn more!