When you have control//And you can't even see.

i love those last lines. you are a very talented writer! but im sure you know that! they rhyming was brilliant. and i can understand it clearly

cool poem, I read your review on a dutch poem which said: I wish I could read dutch, well if you want email me and I will translate things for you, they dont even have to be my own poems ^_^

Nice and meaningful. I loved it.

"With you at the wheel / Blindfolded and dreaming, / And your Life in the back / Bleeding and screaming." I love that! You make it so vivid. And I really like the rhythm in this one. It's a lovely poem, and that's all I'll say about it.

This is really awesome. Life seems so hard for us can we never seem to do anything right. We are our worst enemy. We just have to strive to get what we want and never give up hope. Great poem.
-Frodo

Hi Traciana, thanks for reviewing my story, it was the first one I wrote and I thought what better way to repay you than reviewing one of yours? ^_^

I thought your poem was fantastic, and I'm not just saying that because you said my story was good. I really liked it. It had some GREAT imagry and the simple structure only further enhanced the meaning. It's of good length because long-winded poems are usually difficult to keep consistant and manage to entertain.

Too bad I can't write poetry like you. Hope to read your other works!

Keep up the great work.