Heheheh ... I like Aunt Akana. She's one of those characters that are mean and annoying, but funny at the same time *well, in the reader's POV* I'm sorry I didn't review ealier! ^^; I'll make sure to keep up with the stories on fictionpress.com ... Anyway, good chatper, and I'll be looking forward to the next one.
Pali-chan

Funny, I'm laughing in the uni computer room, so I'll probably get chucked out. Can you try and be faster with the next chapter. Prefrably finish the enitire story before the summer holidays start~?
It's not even that long (wordcount wise) so I'tt be embarassing if it lasts for over a year.

That was funny as usual. For a moment, I thought you guys gave up on Dreamland Japan. I did read and review your other story, Elani. I hope to see another chapter of it soon (and this one as well).

Not bad. Not bad at all. I'll be waiting for the next chapter...

>3] Thank you. Please review. C&C welcome. How can I improve, If I don’t know what I’m doing wrong?<
Very good question! At this point I have no complants, it's a good story and I look forward to when i have a chance to read chapter two.
TTFN-E.J.

I haven't read this story in a long time ... but it's still good. You're doing a good job at taking the place of Rem, Elani. This story is coming on well. And I still need to check up on the dreamland japan site. Anyway, good chapter and I'll be looking for the next one sometime soon (maybe ...)

[pali-chan]

Hey! I am taping DB!
So...any suggestions about what should happen later on? I've got the next chapter sorted, and somewhere along the line they fight yamada. but in between...

Wow. This is even better tahn I expected, Elani. Im reading this on a uni computer, and trying not to laugh. I think handing the writing of the rest of the story over to you was a good thing, I was getting kinda bogged down and stale with the entire thing. When you've finished this, make sure you set up your own account and write some original stuff. (note, I send email to your blueberry address, please respond to it. Tape DB for me)

Wow! This story gets even better and weirder!! I LOVE IT!!
Can't wait for the next chapter! (-^_^-)

Uh-oh, I have a feeling no good can come from Great Aunt Akana. Well, that was funny chapter (as usual). I would've loved to see a robot fight though...ah, well.

Pretty good overall chapter. I found it pretty good, but not as funny as the previous chapter (But I'm not saying it's devoid of ANY funny moments).

I can't wait for the next chapter. I check e-mail everyday to see if you update, so I'll be back

Well, this chapter was definitely a lot funnier than the previous one. I just pray tell that Takeshi doesn't watch the first season of the dubbed DBZ...I can hear go on for days griping about the parachutes line.

I found this very well written, quite a good job. It was quite funny, especially with
“I went into a Comic store, and they’ve flipped all the manga. It’s all backwards, well, most of it.” ALSO, I enjoyed the Krillin saying "Holy Cow" part.

I have just one complaint though. I would appreciate longer chapters. I am obsessed with Dreamland Japan now, I love reading it, and check my e-mail (Nearly) every day. But, if you want to write short chapters, that's okay.

That's my only complaint, and it's not a biggie to me, so that's okay. I am sorta interested in that manga, but I'll wait untill I get my new e-mail address to contact you.

Sorry to see you leave Rem, I hope your sis keeps this up, of course, your probably not ever going to read this...

Anywho, thanks for writing so well, and thanks for reviewing my stuff. I hope you come back sometime, when your not very busy, maybe if you have a tad of free time over the summer?

Well, I came here to review here didn't I. This chapter was pretty decent, but not great. But since you said you tried to rush it, I can understand why. I have no clue how Jeff is going to get out of this one, so I'm coming back.

Please update Elani! I'm assuming that you'll finish this off. It would be great if you did, but if not, oh well.


Sorry I didn't review before, I never recieved the e-mail notifying me that this was here.

This story looks good so far.Hope there is more.