hm... angsty

but it was nice. the rhyming and allkeep it up!

although depressing, it's understandable, and that's the feeling too many people feel... it's like a sad love story... well, yeah, it is. nice work &)

never felt and never thought. goods anywasy

Aw! This is so sad. Great poem. I could definately tell exactly what you were saying. You are very good at that. Keep writing!

Wow.. This is sad. Really good!

Loved it.

Heart of the Sword

I love this poem. It flows well and gets the point across. I like the emotion in it too. Great job!

Lilly

very sad and sweet poem, love the last line of this one, nicely done