|Reviews for Exquisite Pain|
| piuk 12/30/07 . chapter 1
The beginning and especially the second paragraph reminded me so much of something I once wrote (I'm not sure if it's a poem or whatever :) )! But I never wrote about not letting everyone else win, I think you just inspired me... :D
| Harajuku 2/21/05 . chapter 1
| kerr 10/19/03 . chapter 1
thanx! this is useful. yeah. i guess i wouldnt want those laughing and mocking me to win!
| peppermint-kiss 10/6/03 . chapter 1
that was nice. well i cut sometimes. its so addictive, the adrenalin rush and the flowing blood. but ive tried to cut down on the amount i cut. :) cuz when you hurt yourself it sometimes hurts others.
| OJW 8/16/03 . chapter 1
OH I LIKE THIS.
There's a lesson to it! And I love it!
.Even though I 'm disgusted with Cutting.. IT's just so heartaching to read about it.. and it hurts me.
But this poem is great :)!
I LOVE THE LAST STANZA!
| BrokenDesires 7/26/03 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed reading it. I have to admit that I have turned to self-mutilation before.. It's not something people should go through, it doesn't help, just makes things worse because people get involved.
The only part that I didn't like was that it rhymed, in a way, im against rhyming poems, i dont like them, they annoy me. but it was still good reguardless.
| InkedinSin 7/15/03 . chapter 1
run on...could've cut couple of lines off or maybe a stanza...but in over all it's not bad.
| Darkness Shadowed 7/15/03 . chapter 1
"this knife hold such . . . charm . . . it's all fake," magnificent. A truth to which many sheild their eyes. Speak out as your heart wills you. Save a life where you can.
| Lieschen 7/14/03 . chapter 1
Very good writing, made me think. I can't fathom hurting myself in that way, and yet, I could see how someone could turn to self-destruction as a way of taking out their anger. Good job, once again. :)