The beginning and especially the second paragraph reminded me so much of something I once wrote (I'm not sure if it's a poem or whatever :) )! But I never wrote about not letting everyone else win, I think you just inspired me... :D

love it

thanx! this is useful. yeah. i guess i wouldnt want those laughing and mocking me to win!

that was nice. well i cut sometimes. its so addictive, the adrenalin rush and the flowing blood. but ive tried to cut down on the amount i cut. :) cuz when you hurt yourself it sometimes hurts others.

OH I LIKE THIS.

There's a lesson to it! And I love it!

.Even though I 'm disgusted with Cutting.. IT's just so heartaching to read about it.. and it hurts me.

But this poem is great :)!

I LOVE THE LAST STANZA!

I really enjoyed reading it. I have to admit that I have turned to self-mutilation before.. It's not something people should go through, it doesn't help, just makes things worse because people get involved.

The only part that I didn't like was that it rhymed, in a way, im against rhyming poems, i dont like them, they annoy me. but it was still good reguardless.

run on...could've cut couple of lines off or maybe a stanza...but in over all it's not bad.

"this knife hold such . . . charm . . . it's all fake," magnificent. A truth to which many sheild their eyes. Speak out as your heart wills you. Save a life where you can.

Stevie

Very good writing, made me think. I can't fathom hurting myself in that way, and yet, I could see how someone could turn to self-destruction as a way of taking out their anger. Good job, once again. :)

ELise