Love love love your plot line, love the characters too!

Mwahahaha!
Another of your stories read! xD
I liked this one too, of course. And How Seven's name came about was awesome also.

Can't wait for more~
Meliorate Calamity

very cute, I love it.

please update sooN!

Was this chapter meant to be cut off abruptly? :O

THIS IS SO. CUTE.

LOVE.

*hearts*

I like your story. Very good. And strangely I think this last chapter about Dinsmore (what's with the name, anyhow?) and Payton was actually one of the best ones, for some reason. Update soon. Although I might not remember which story this is because i'm currently reading all the ones with guys named travis. don't ask me why. There's actually more than I expected. A randomly popular name. Anyhow, yeah. add more.

OH wait. I just checked the update date. It's been a year. Nevermind, I think. There's no point. Although... you started in what? 2003? and ended in 08. 10 chapters in five years. jeez. that's even slower than I do it. It's pretty good, though, so, er... muy bien.

My heartiest condolences for the departure of your goldfish. Must be real sad to lose a pet of two years. I am a very emotion kind of guy, so its lucky that i dont have a pet. cause if the pet were to die I would probably get depressed as hell again...

Anyway, I am depressed a lot, for some reason or the other. You kinda get used to it.

And coming back to the story, I really like it. Beautiful characterization. Kinda lulls you into the character's life.

Good work, and keep writing!

I absolutely love this story! I like the character of Seven. And the name 'seven' is so cool! :D

The story is beautiful!

I was trying to figure out how that fit in. I was kind of thinking that maybe they were from Travis' old school or something. But it's killing me! How will the religious thing is a problem.

"his dad had forgotten the "T" when writing Steven and his mom had liked the way Seven sounded and it went with the cute little birthday thing."

That is the single, funniest reason for someones name I've ever heard. It's hilarious and didn't make the name annoying!!

Poor Seven, I think his siblings do like him really. ^^'

I feel bad that I haven't read this story in a while. Even with the serious realistic tones all around, the humor in this story makes it very so plausible. I know that this recent part did not include Seven and Travis, but it was a nice change, showing what was going on between Dinsmore and his rich girl. I like the break, it was an interesting POV change.

I hope that you update this soon.

I ddn't even realise Dinsmore had already sort-of been introduced until the very end with the phonecall. xD Anyway, nice chapter, though a little bit random to begin with. :P

i love this story. so cute. i like seven already he's my fav and travis so cute and tall lol. and i had a feeling he was going to move around seven's neighbor lol. ahah tat was funny about seven thinking it wasn't travis lol. good storie.

plz plz update soon again :) my fav. me addy u :)

Love this story, hope you keep updating :]