woah, I really like this, it just flows, and it's so powerful. Really cool, great job, keep writting!

Of Course I can! and thanks for the review! Means alot to acctually have people give my work the time of day. lol!

Interesting ... very interesting ...

But that NOT an insult. I find poems hard to judge (even though I write them most often). But I like yours. I like the last stanza, the end is pretty good.

If it isn't too much to ask, could you review my works sometime? ^^