Okay, DEFINATELY short

Very good. Very descriptive. For a second I thought I was looking a my profile page because I have a poem with the same name. =P

This is great. I loved the first and third lines, but the imagery for the second line didn't seem to go with the others... that's just me, of course, it's a wonderful haiku. Keep writing.

Very expressive!

~ CoolBeans18s

Very nice description.


~Heart of the Sword

its very cute. in fact i like it. my favorite work is abyss. that added to the liking. short poems arent usually a favorite of mine, but this is nice. ^_~

I think your haiku is a great expression of the relaxtion of night, against the tire of day.

keep it up! :D