grabe, this review proves how much we spoke (or how much we DIDN'T speak) to each other during college. i have no idea what (rather, WHO) you're talking about here, and neither did i know you had a fictionpress acct. either, or that you even wrote poetry in the first place.
i must say, i missed a LOT, didn't i? this is a really good poem! :)

wow this is scary how well i can relate to this! good job!
-Courtney
thx for the reveiw!

I like this! I like how it so firmly bases itself in reality to begin with, then wanders off into the metaphors, the relationships, etc. All the great poets use that kind of format. Let's see more like this!

quite interesting. *smiles* good job.