i think most people can relate to that in some way. in all, i thought the poem was ok, for it was definatly honest, and that always brings more feeling to a piece. but it lacked flow and a commen thred. like its fine that all those different feelings are descripations of one feeling, but you kinda need to explain that somehow. or why it is your feeling this. i don't know, i'm not sure i'm saying the right thing to get my point across, but i hope you understand. anyways, thanks for reviewing the poem 'a poem 4 us girls'.

i know exactly how this feels - trust me. nice break up of sentences and physical description of that which is inside. good job.