Aw... how sweet!

Beautiful and sad.

very sweet ...i liked it very much

Rather painful piece, a bit unlike your other ones.. You used repetition here again, and made this sound much like a chant.. Interestin really.. Its a good ending.. Nice work.. =)

...nifty...it works out very well. I can't see anything that causes something bad...it's all very good! ^_^ you use the repitetion in a way that doesn't get tedious, and that is REALLY helpful considering the amount of times things are repeated. Great job!...Spiffy!