 nikolaki 2003-07-15 . chapter 1Whoa there. I guess I've found someone else who fully appreciates the bennefits of daydreaming life away. HEH. I gotta be honest, I truly Love this poem! You beautifully paint the full picture of a carefree paradise; one that even allowed me to escape into it while just reading. I like at the end how you're taken back to the real world. I guess sometimes we all just wish we could stay asleep. |