oh cool! i saw this at DTR but you changed it and its really really good so far; echo is such a cool character (and i think i know who 'he' really is! :D). are you going to post the updated version on the boards?

the new chapter one is very well written ... can't wait until chapter three!

Brilliant stuff; the dialogue - especially Mren in Chapter 2 - fits wonderfully. I shall keep an eye on this.

Yes, that was very different from Autumn Untitled, but one thing the stories share is quality. And this qaulity is easily seen in the author's ability to keep the reader interested in the interesting story.

wow, that's a unique story you've got there! i think you spelled description wrong but whatever, i hope to see more of this!