'I am only reviewing because you want people to.' err yeh. i review because i want to give people my opinion on their poems. But anyway! I dont flame u cus u flamed me well u didnt. u just sed tht u didnt like the poem. But i still think this poem of yours is totally amazing and so well written.

FABULOUS!! lol bravo, it flows SO well and is really great to reada.Builds up really nice momentum and beautifully written.

wow! thats all i have to say!! well not really, but nice job! exellent use of litterary devices!