Wow, that was awesome. And, how true. This work has touched me. Don't stop writing work that touches people. Touching is good.

OH MY EFFING GOD! THIS IS SWEET!I LVOE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! Finally another person who hates war as much as I do. YES! (thanks again for all the reviews)

yeah, i know the feeling.

Woah. Again, great poem. It's too real for comfort.

*shaks head* to true, wise words my friend, wise words. Also..HOLY CRAPOLA! YOU B-DAY IS 6 DAYS AFTER MINE! I was born in '90 you? Also my cat says 'purr' he is on my lap.but other than that...yeah good poem! WRITE ON!!(=

O... nice ending! I like it!! The theme of reality sounding a little like war is kind of cool.

And thank you SO much for reveiwing my stuff. It's awesome to hear that my poems have inspired someone, and you should never stop writing. Stay in the game, dude! =)

*wipes tears from eyes* wonderful! Short, but emotional. Thank you! I love it!

Not bad

Very touching, work though short you get the message across very well. A view I hold very much myself, the fighting needs to stop, otherwise the world will turn to hell, and who can enjoy hell? Inspiring work
-nix-

OMG, I'm going to use that somewhere on my site (If you let me) I love it to much, That is like my most fav poem in the world

O, I was reading this and thinking, it does sorta seem like a dream. But it isn't, it's real.

wow...cool.

I really liked it!! Short and sweet...well yeah you know what i mean. Your poems are really good!! Continue please!
Liriel

This expresses war really good... Good job.

~Shelila~

her..this is good...is it about the war? anyways, its really good...