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| CKSHORTY 2006-04-04 ch 10, anon. | abuseGreat great sequel! Though it could've been longer :-( :)I hate when good stories come to an end CK |
| MorwenSteelsheen 2005-09-29 ch 10,  | abuseExcellent. I really enjoyed reading both stories, and I would really like to read another one. |
| cariluv 2005-01-04 ch 10, | abuseThis was nice! I enjoyed your series.~cariluv |
| Twizzlers 2004-08-10 ch 10, | abuseI love this story to death. Jared and Iris crack me up. Plus you write so well, it's hard not to keep reading. I would leave you a more detailed review, but it's late and I'm afraid it would just sound stupid. Plus I'd like to go read more about Jared and Iris, so I think I'm going to go do that now. You're an excellent writer. >>Twizz |
| TiggerSTale22 2004-07-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is my favorite Jared and Iris adventure so far. Iris's POV is so adorable when he proposes. |
| hjgtfdchjmjh 2004-06-02 ch 10, | abuseOh gosh *fakey weepy thingy* that was wonderful. *Real weepy thingy* |
| hjgtfdchjmjh 2004-06-02 ch 1, | abuseOy god, you're a laugh! |
| Charli DC 2004-05-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story is funny and really enjoyable. It made me laugh alot and I couldn't stop reading!Keep up the good work! |
| bright indian stars 2004-04-06 ch 10, anon. | abuseokay that has got to be the funniest story i have heard in ages, omg i am series, dont stop writing, even if u get ubducted by aliens dotn stop writing, okay maybe not ;) but dont stop writing that was hilarious, and yes i will murder u if u dont continue it, like say yeah jarod and iris baby story thingi, it's hilarious man.. keep up hte good work Bright INdian stars |
| POAS 2004-01-01 ch 10, anon. | abuseThat's so sweet. *tear* I loved this stories. Nicely done. POAS |
| daisy 2003-12-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this story! I laughed and laughed...and laughed some more. The whole Iris thinks she must be a bit asian because she enjoys feeding people-hilarious! |
| I am Gone 2003-09-20 ch 10, | abuseExcelent story.I had a great time reading. |
| Jillybean 2003-09-06 ch 10, anon. | abuseOh bad Marcus - bad Amber - bad Kyle and aw - sweet Jared and Iris! |
| Ashlita 2003-09-05 ch 10, anon. | abuseYou're right, Marco, Kyle, and Amber's story does steal the thunder, but I still loved the wedding. And the little details would have been boring. I feel bad for Julia thought. :-\ And, I have no ideas, just keep going! Maybe a Julia/Kyle spinoff since you did kinda just leave their problems hanging there w/o conclusion. Or include that in the other story you might write. I dunno, whatever you want. Adios for now. ~Ashlita |
| differentlyhappy 2003-09-05 ch 10, anon. | abusei suck at giving ideas so i will just give support. great chapter!~! bravo! can't wait 4 the next update |