I think this story was way to short fpr me. Not enough twists and turns. Not to sound critical however i don't think that it was the best I've ever read. Origanal idea quite good however the plot wasn't as well thought out as it could have been.

Exently written. I loved the climax of the story. Made me gasp!! My eyes went wide, my mouth dropped. Pure beauty.

I wanted to thank you, presonally, for reviewing Tales of a Vampire. I'm greatly thankful. I know that mentioning your name in one of the authors notes is not enough, so, thank you very much. It's very appreciated.

I love your sophisticated writing style. It's quite refreshing. My own writing style can not be as mature.
Again, thank you for reviewing Tales of a Vampire. I hope you're enjoying it.

I'm at someone elses's workplace right now, so I'll read and review the rest of your stuff later.

Thanks again! Ciao!
*Countess De Lioncourt*

OH! I liked it... it was great. The mystery, the fact that you can use so little people (unlike me)hehe. I loved it.

great story! tis a chilling tale...hehehe im punny arent i? but theres some typos here and there

Pretty good story, I was actually expecting to have the husband end up having intended to kill his wife, but killing the twin sister instead. Good job!

~He Who Walks On All Fours

Wow!

That was brilliant! It was the tinsiest tad predictable at the end, but it was over all amazing! ^_^ Good Work!

:: SpRiNgRoLL27 ::

Brilliant! I couldn't find a single error anywhere. It was original, captivating, and a damn fine piece of writing. Congratulations!

WOW!COOL ^^

Umm, I am not sure if it is just my computer, if there is something wrong with the site, or if the upload was bad, but your story isn't loaded in any distiguishable language.