There were a couple of typos, but that's okay. Even some of my poems have had typos in them. (*slaps herself*) Beautiful poem. I loved it. I'm also flattered that you like my poems...(*blushes*)

Cirien Phoenix

hmm...neat poem, it has some great imagery...2nd stanza, typo- u put "star" instead of "stare", and in the 3rd stanza, the rhythm changed, and was of a bit in the 4th and last

Pretty dark poem...great ending...

o...O.O very gnifty *_* I reeaally really really like this one :D

I like the rhymes! good!

Good! Keep writing stuff, just like this.

JunJin-Lover