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| blue-eyes91 2005-07-15 ch 1, | very nice i really like the jouranl format please continue the story! |
| A ABSENTMINDED PSYCHO KILLE... 2004-04-12 ch 1, | Good. I love any war stories. By the way the Montreal Canadiens rock! |
| Exam_stressed_NOW 2003-10-11 ch 1, | I think this is quite good. But i feel it's not strong enough... the man's emotions. espcially since this is a journal kinda thing. oh, and the last part is good. keep writing! :) |
| tpaca 2003-09-18 ch 1, | Mabye Paul can meet a corpral Hitler? |
| quietdrama22 2003-07-15 ch 1, | Nice story, I think that the emotion is probably what the soldier has felt. Keep writing, I dunno what else to say : > ) |