Reviews for Broken Little Doll

NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDo... 2004-01-15 ch 1,	abuseooh, I like! reminds me of some of my stuff. This poem is really really beautiful. =D Tokiko please check out some of my stuff too, okay? thanks..
silverdream139 2003-11-15 ch 1,	abuseWow...great meanings, wonderful images. I love this poem, and these lines: "You've done your time, and served your purpose" "And they'll keep on playing that game, until you're pushed over the edge. Until you feel like breaking yourself." Fabulous ending. Awesome work. Ja~ -Terra
Takada Saiko 2003-10-13 ch 1,	abuseMy goodness... I can completely relate to that. You can relate this to more than just guys, b/c sometimes NO ONE wants you, and that's what drives you over the edge. Beautiful piece of work If you have time, could you possibly check out some of my stuff? TS
unwritten 2003-07-15 ch 1,	abusethats so sad. but i liked it, it was a good poem. nice job!