|Reviews for Chocolát|
| Lady B.V Rose 8/21/03 . chapter 1
Nice spin on it! your summary was very right!
| ittybittytreefrog 7/24/03 . chapter 1
This poem is really good. You write very dark poetry, but I like it. It isn't whiny or depressing, just very powerful.
| Kesshi Mashin 7/19/03 . chapter 1
Hn... interesting... good stuff.
| Garrett C 7/18/03 . chapter 1
Very short, but very sweet.
Like chocolate, or better yet a forbidden fruit whose juices stain the blood and leave behind nothing of the sort which existed before.
I actually can't say anything bad here. You seem to enjoy writing, oh how do you say this... well.
Congrats on the talent.
| Keep it 100 7/16/03 . chapter 1
I liked it. Short, but it said a lot.
Heart of the Sword
| unwritten 7/15/03 . chapter 1