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| Kat-Renee Kittel 2005-05-07 ch 1,  | abuseShort, but descriptively vivid. ^..^ |
| Dying Without Gackt 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abuseShort, but very magical! I love all the feeling you put in such a small amount of space. Thanks for all the reviews by the way! |
| Luneko 2005-03-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is so lovely... You capture the physical sensation perfectly. The spiritual sensation - that I'll have to think about. |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-12-01 ch 1, | abuseMist shrouds our skin cool,Tingling dew bells tinkling tulle,Heaven's gentle mewl. -m- |
| frugale 2003-12-23 ch 1, | abuseNice expression of that mental image! |
| CancerianQueen 2003-09-21 ch 1, | abuseOOh, this gave me shivers! Well done! :) Keep writing, ~Naomi~ |
| Werecat99 2003-09-07 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. It certainly felt mystical. |
| cosmo-queen 2003-08-17 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful poem. I could really feel the mysticism you painted with these beautiful words. Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Zainab 2003-07-22 ch 1, | abusevery pretty |
| Pear 2003-07-21 ch 1, anon. | abusea very cool effect this haiku creates. ^^ Wonderfully written as usual. |
| Lidless Eye 2003-07-20 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. Captures a ton of serenity through it... great work! |
| Plato's Optic Runaway 2003-07-20 ch 1, | abuseoh, beatiful. you have great imagery. i love a well done haiku. ^^ thanks for all your reviews. and for favoriting me...::blushes:: eek, people here are bloody nice. i'll read some of your other stuff...once my life gets a grip and i can have some time...::cringe:: besides, if Heart of the Sword has you on her favs, you've got to be incredible. eh, wonder how i got there...::shrug:: anyway, this is getting ranty...i'll go now. |
| Psycho-kyugurl 2003-07-19 ch 1, | abuseVery well potrayed I must say. When standing under light mist...the feeling...it's not easy to put them into words. |
| ivorysunset 2003-07-17 ch 1, | abuseI can almost feel the mist on my skin and also inside of me. Really what a haiku should be like - being able to feel what's being written about, even with so few words. |
| CoolBeans18s 2003-07-16 ch 1, | abuseLovely, refreashing, beautiful, peaceful, and almost slighty sur-real...I love it! This has to be one of your best! ~ COOlBeans18s |