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Kat-Renee Kittel 2005-05-07 . chapter 1
Short, but descriptively vivid. ^..^
Dying Without Gackt 2005-04-23 . chapter 1
Short, but very magical! I love all the feeling you put in such a small amount of space. Thanks for all the reviews by the way!
Luneko 2005-03-16 . chapter 1
This is so lovely... You capture the physical sensation perfectly. The spiritual sensation - that I'll have to think about.
Manuel Fajar 2004-12-01 . chapter 1
Mist shrouds our skin cool,Tingling dew bells tinkling tulle,Heaven's gentle mewl. -m-
frugale 2003-12-23 . chapter 1
Nice expression of that mental image!
CancerianQueen 2003-09-21 . chapter 1
OOh, this gave me shivers! Well done! :)

Keep writing,
~Naomi~
Werecat99 2003-09-07 . chapter 1
I loved it. It certainly felt mystical.
cosmo-queen 2003-08-17 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem. I could really feel the mysticism you painted with these beautiful words. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
Zainab 2003-07-22 . chapter 1
very pretty
Pear 2003-07-21 . chapter 1
a very cool effect this haiku creates. ^^ Wonderfully written as usual.
Lidless Eye 2003-07-20 . chapter 1
Awesome. Captures a ton of serenity through it... great work!
Plato's Optic Runaway 2003-07-20 . chapter 1
oh, beatiful. you have great imagery. i love a well done haiku. ^^ thanks for all your reviews. and for favoriting me...::blushes:: eek, people here are bloody nice. i'll read some of your other stuff...once my life gets a grip and i can have some time...::cringe:: besides, if Heart of the Sword has you on her favs, you've got to be incredible. eh, wonder how i got there...::shrug:: anyway, this is getting ranty...i'll go now.
Psycho-kyugurl 2003-07-19 . chapter 1
Very well potrayed I must say. When standing under light mist...the feeling...it's not easy to put them into words.
ivorysunset 2003-07-17 . chapter 1
I can almost feel the mist on my skin and also inside of me. Really what a haiku should be like - being able to feel what's being written about, even with so few words.
CoolBeans18s 2003-07-16 . chapter 1
Lovely, refreashing, beautiful, peaceful, and almost slighty sur-real...I love it! This has to be one of your best!

~ COOlBeans18s
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