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youknowwho 2003-09-08 ch 1,	Jules! I remember you writing this. Don't abandon it...I like it at least... :-) Just try to stay in one point of view maybe? Also, maybe try to make things more clear. ~ A
Restricted Thoughts 2003-07-18 ch 1,	J- the story's good, but very confusing. I had trouble following what was going on, and the history of the Kaa and Quirr, and everything... need more info!! Write like 3 more chapters, then post. 'Course, it is also very late... yawn, blink a few times Anyway, i tried, so here's your review. Later, -A.