Sad chapter. Too bad Haela killed herself she was one of my favourite ccharacters(Ryu, James, Charles and Hannah being the others). Great chapter nnetheless, mysterious too
whose the new guy?
talk about coincidence.
Keep up the good work.

Very nice. Can't wait 'till the next chapter. Maybe you should add some new bad guys and maybe give us some info on this new character.
~DB

great chapter, need more info on ryu an jeremy (how long have they felt like this about each other?)
keep writing tho quite good charles is very funny to :-)

great chapter, need more info on ryu an jeremy (how long have they felt like this about each other?)
keep writing tho quite good charles is very funny to :-)

Awsome story so far.. keep up the good work. the characters are great sofar Ryu's one of my fav.

Hahahahaha! So good! Her bra hahahaha! I thought for a sec that Charls was gonna go through an entire chapter without being a perv... but its still funny... and Jeremy's sudden change of heart... makes for an interesting future chapters :D
~DB

Heh. Charles is the same ol' perv he's always been. No real surprise there. I was surprised that James and Haela didn't get together in this chapter, too, since everybody else seemed to be... I sort of had a feeling that Ryu and Jeremy would get together, but never that Charles and Hannah would EVER get THAT close... In fact, I was surprised that Hannah decided to take a walk with him alone. Heh. Great chap, by the way, definitely the mushiest one yet... Not that I like mushy, but you've got to have character development to shape them up a bit. If they're just there with no purpose, the story becomes sort of pointless and you don't care for the characters... Anyway, got to go. Update soon!
'Slayer

THIS IS THE BEST STORY YET! I want more! more more more! ^__^ AH I LOVE IT! Haela and James! Poor Ryu! Bad Jake Bad Daniel! ^__^
MORE SOON PLEASE ^_^

So far, very well done... Keep up the good work... Favorite character is Joseph... Black... Darkness... Sweet...
Eagerly antisipating the next chapter:
~DragnBreth

lol... Charles is funny. "Why do they always do that?!" Good stuff. This was a great chapter! I'm so glad you updated faster than usual... SO GLAD! And I can't help but feel bad for Jeremy, after all he's gone through... And how could he ever hang out with Jake and Daniel? I mean, it's not their fault that they thought he was dead... They couldn't have helped him! Stupid unfair Jeremy... Anyways, great chapter, because I always like backstories that tell me a little more about the characters. And I still feel bad for Ryu... Great chapter, again. UPDATE!!
'Slayer

GAH! Ryu's evil! No way! I just thought she was one of those crazy random characters, but she's taken on a new definition of emotion since this chapter... Who knew she felt lonely? And jeez, Charles is really a perv... Anyway, it took you SO LONG TO UPDATE! NEVER DO THAT AGAIN!! *freaks out and has a seizure on the floor*
'Slayer

YAY! Best chapter ever. Very glad that you updated, I was beginning to think you gave up forever on this! Anyway, this story is much more mature and not so insane, also it is told from a first person point of view now, which is disorienting, but better in more ways than one. I really like this story now... I ought to keep my eye on it for a while... also, could you read my new Halloween-based story, even though it's not Halloween anymore? It's called "The Night of the Pumpkin." 'Preciate it! Thanks!

See ya later.

|| Agent Slayer ||

WOW. O_O That chapter kicked **. ;_; Aw... I liked Scott... oh well... heh, Charles is annoying. XD Anyway, words cannot describe how great this story is. And besides... I'm too lazy to think of them all =3 Merf. ^_^

CONTINUE!! :D

Funny. Kinda. Well, lots of Super Novas and Soul Extractions, and now James has his cool sword back. Charles is a little devil, but I guess it won't be too bad to add a lighter touch to the story. Now Jake and Daniel are responsible for destroying James' people... not good. And they're too strong. They must be wizards or something. And they're very cocky. Good chapter, overall. Please continue!

See ya later.

|| Agent Slayer ||

Whoo, time for some semi-constructive cristisism...

THE STORY KICKS **!
Its got a great plot, and your charechters are so well formed. The diolouge is good too, your doing a great job so far!

much luv
-Sin