I'm really impressed at your writing skills. This was amazing (as is all your work)! Thank you for sharing your gift.

OMG Habib!
What is dis **!?!
Itz soo gay !
I swear!

^^

Nah im jokin... top-notch stuff G =p

Wonderful story! A tad bit on the sad story, but angst is a beautiful thing:)

~Kori

wow, i mean, truly wow. i have to say that in all honesty that was one the best short pieces that i've ever read, and i don't say that very often at all. everything about this was excellent. your writing style is great and imaginitive. you get across a good point and reall make the reader stop and think. the quality of your writing is phenominal.