Made me think...Which isn't too healthy for a person undergoing a cold. Aagh my head hurts now!p Great piece!

And He always will forgive us, that's the good news! I'm SO glad you wrote this! It's great!

Write on!

Hi,

A thought-provoking poem. Good!

Thanks

Powerful message..Awesome job!

wow. this is a master peice short or not. i feel like i should say so much more but i can't find the words to describe my feelings so i'll have to stop with this review.

God bless you.

Very Good. I really liked it. How could they do such a cruel thing.

Please read and review my work at is called "What if Jesus was?"

It takes real strength to forgive something like this. Nice work.

Heart of the Sword

creepy ending there, interesting..yea, i know what its suppose to be about but i wanna take it in my own way, i dunno, not very religious, anywayz, muchly well written and enjoyed, awesome job