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Zarancids 2003-07-28 ch 1,	Did you expand this story from a dream you had? In my opinion, it would be much more enjoyable if you would explain where this story is coming from...I almost stopped reading cause I didn't understand the first few paragraphs. However, I began to just read and an event began to unfold rather than a story. Anyway, you got a great imagination. Peace.
Jessicka 2003-07-20 ch 1,	You wrote THIS last year?**!I gotta work on my writting skills...It was really good...quite different from your other stories but still really good. xoxox, Jessicka
Berks 2003-07-16 ch 1,	Very good idea. However, it usually isn't a good idea to bring nack such an old story when yur writing is developping. Style here needs some work, and it gets a bit confusing at times. Also, the clichés need to die. But great ideas.
Mitchy Sextacular 2003-07-16 ch 1,	wow u are such a good writer, and u wrote this a year ago? damn u have great potential, and that is no lie. Keep writing baby love from mitch