Not weird, amazing. I'm sorry, I'm in shock with all your pieces that all I can say is they're "amazing" or "incredible" when really they're so much more than that.. this is just another example. I love this piece because it's so true.. people have the tendency to state the obvious, like you're some idiot who doesn't know anything.



and there's nothing wrong with sleeping with a stuffed animal even though you're almost seventeen. :P

yo...

watiwat here. kewl fic. very nice... ur a gr8 writer, and u shud write heaps more...

byez 4 now..
w@+!w@+

a VERY typical dora story... but what did we expect?? :P no offence!

umm... VERY depressing... sounds like you're suicidal... whoa!

~Carol~

I like it, but I think you should've made it one paragraph, and not put it in a poem-like structure. I think it would add a lot to its strength if you present it as one "big" piece of text.

nice... depressing...but nice...
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got nuttin else 2 say dude
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aish
yeah
stuff
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ill review ur othaz
signd-
blak

hey dora wow ur reali deep so cool... read ma stori plez im gonna read ur other stories now

You write wonderful stories you know but alot of angsty ones. Wonderful writing:)