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| Cassandra-Adara 2005-03-20 ch 1, | abuseI love this! It's cute. Well, cute might not be the right word, but it kinda works. We ourselves for granted so much in this world, its a wonder why.. |
| MauraMellon 2003-07-18 ch 1, | abuseThe world does demand a lot from us, doesn't it? I guess that's what poetry's for. I like all of this, except the "ain't" in the last line (just one of my pet peeves). |