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| Ileandra Young 2003-08-08 ch 1,  | abuseI've read only a few stories on this site so far and this is already one of my favourites. You have an incredible way with words and an equally impressive way of arranging them for maximum effect. I've fallen for all your characters and find myself chilled the bone and looking over my shoulder as I read. I live in London so I don't know why I'm looking for scarecrows over my shoulder; the only reason I can think of is that your story and your amazing flaire with writing was enough to do that to me. WOW and WOW again. I'm just off to read a few more bits of yours now... x |
| Clear-Aurora 2003-07-18 ch 1, | abuseWow. this was GOOD! I really like how you had the main character be the narrator, it made parts funny. "Hell, yeah!" Eric laughed. "Gaw, you shoulda seen the neighbors!" I imagine they looked a lot like I do. LOL~and gosh, it was soo freaky how the scarecrows went from 12, to 11, to 10, to 6... I can't believe they didn't care about sacraficing Eric! lol! The ending-I like that a LOT. "The crows had come" That was...wow. I'm putting this on my favorite story :-D |
| IHJ 2003-07-18 ch 1, | abuseWhat? They're willing to sacrifice Eric for keeping the crows away from their corn? Just the corn? I know it's their source of income but... *Sniff* Well, unique story. A bit loose in some areas but mostly good. |
| Stage Faery 2003-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseLordy..ok...umm..you lost touch someplace middle/end i think, before the sacrifice stuff though. When she saw the scarecrow devouring the crow. I think from there to the sacrafice needs a little patching up, it didn't seem to flow with the rest of it. You also chose a topic, Killer Scarecrows that seems to come out of an R.L Stine book. At the end with Cody and at the beginning, i took it seriously, but the crow and the hat not so much. Also: "And that's when I saw the hand creeping over the side of the couch,... " That paragraph intro is pure genius, and many parts of your story rang with truth. Keep working on it, i'm sure it'll turn into something highly freakazoidal. |
| Della C 2003-07-17 ch 1, | abuseTWo Words: holy **. |