Perfectly long enough.
I had the author alert for this story in my in box for so long. Now that I'm not sleep deprived and am actually sick enough to want to stay home and get sucked into the computer, I'm glad I go to finish the story.
Eh..there's a place for graphic romance descriptions and most places aren't it. I think this one was just enough. And I like the characters, as always.

lit.- an escape from reality when it becomes to much...
but, sweatheart dont grow pages on me, 'cause from what i know of the boys at our school none are capable of the witty repartee that 'saved your narrator'... just a warning...
the lover

well there you go, predicting my every move. well thats pretty good. i guess we should all follow our hearts whether it sounds like a story or goes exactly against what a story should be. wither way, everyon should be themself.

well did i understand?

Hi!

I always like it when I learn something from stories because the authors took the time to learn something and stick it in. I learned about small planes this way.

Anyway, this chapter is excellent. No awkward sentences. Very enjoyable.

okay, whatever.
theres a sentence when Dom is explaining to shane that it wasnt shanes fault, however it never says that dom was talking and shane was the last person mentioned before the quotes, so i would suggest making it a bit more clear who is doing hte talking.
ill just leave it at that.

Again... good writing. Some really fun descriptive words that made me read sentences over just so i could read 'em and grin again!

Anywho, if i end up not liking the ending, i can and will pummel you with an organic carrot.. or something like that.

geez, cookies too.
welcome to Desa's autobiography.

so is this shining knight also based on a fictional character

by the way, the writing is excelelnt as usual

hmm, you seem to be writing a lot of romances lately . . .
HEY, it was just an observation!

well, this is obviously you, so im interested in where you will take yourself.

Hey 'zebra!! (As you can see I'm feeling particularly lazy even though this sentence took more effort to type than your full name would have)

ehem.

Long time no see! Glad you're back.

I like Dom, don't get me wrong. Julia, I feel a kinship with.

Oh, only one thing that sounded funny: “...and wanting to take up both archery and fencing.” It seemed a bit strange with the rest of the sentence. Don't quite know what's wrong. Maybe if you put "started wanting to..."

Fp.net was being evil to me, too for about five days. Now it's okay again. Hope you're able to keep up this updating for a while!

I used to be like that... never knew where i was or what class i was in because i was completely submerged in whatever book i was reading. I don't see the point of snapping out of it. The world of books tends to be far better than the real one.

Lovely little piece of writing yeh got here.

*slaps Dom upside the head*

Reading was the only thing that helped me survive high school! Okay, that and Taekwondo, but STILL!

If she was a true bibliomaniac, she would carry at least four books on her at all times, at least in a school enviroment, like I do. *grin* I enjoyed this story very much, the whole relating to it made it so much more enjoyable, but I don't see why anyone would want to reenter the real world when they can have books instead. *sighs dramtically* Oh well, I'm glad to see you finally posteda new story, I like your style of writing. Keep up the good work.

thats really cool. (at least you knew about shiggy . . . ) well, who am i to intervene on a conversation between desa an herself. cary on madam (is that the female version of monsieur) Writer.

Good story. It all flowed together; it wasn't at all choppy. I should probably worry about that happening to me...well not really. Is there going to be anymore of the story? I'd be happy to read more. Keep it up.