|Reviews for Phantom|
| Marshie 7/16/06 . chapter 1
That was sex in text.
| Jolly Jeff 7/17/04 . chapter 1
That was a good story and I enjoyed it, but I do have a couple of complaints:
1. Separate it into chapters. The Scroll bar was tiny and every time I moved it down a tiny little bit the page moved down a lot.
2.I didn't really get the names straight ever. All I knew was that Robert was captain, Simon was the traitor, and Eddie and George were twins. I thought North and Rummy were the same person, and I couldn't remember who was whose son. I enjoyed the story nevertheless, but I *was* confused at many parts.
I will go on to read the Princess/Pirate/Musketeer.
| Lightness 12/8/03 . chapter 1
ya know, that was hardly a 'short story'.
anyway, this was good stuff. your character development was really good and i loved the dialogue. it was very realistic and flowed wonderfully. i think you could have had a bit more descriptions but oo well. the storyline was very good. very unexpected and lotsa twists. i liked it lots. great job. ill be looking into your little princess story a bit later. kay, buh byee now. keep writing.
| Krista 7/30/03 . chapter 1
I liked it. It was one of those stories where you didnt know how it would end. One of those on the edge of your seats stories. I hated North, he was annoying. I liked Jack (not Ruddigar, the other one), cuz I like his name and hes a good guy. I dont like how the Phantom blew up, its one of those ships that should never go away. I wish the story had been about how the Phantom never died. Crew die everyday, but the ship is there until the end! And once the ship dies, the crew should as well. I think they should build a Phantom II.
But over all, this was a riviting plot that makes me want to read the sequel, The Phantom Strikes Back (Krista is on it this time).