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| Silver Ice 2003-07-18 ch 1,  | abuseWowie-that was very very very VERY sweet! I'm going to go review the rest of your stuff (and learn how to type). Shalohm |
| Misfit toy 1016 2003-07-17 ch 1, | abusei think my favorite line was "provacative little gems" i love mataphors/similes i enjoyed this poem and only hope that someday i can feel the way you do when you look into this persons eyes! Keep Writing *~*Courtnie*~* |
| AutumnRhapsody 2003-07-17 ch 1, | abuseI like that! The rhymes were good, and I like the way it ends, realizing the other person's in love too when he looks at her eyes...For a bit now I've been a tad bit obsessed w/the idea that eyes can show so much. But I don't quite get the secret pact thing-is it secret from him, if he hasn't realized that he's in love yet? |