lmao, definitely not expected and very cute, muchly enjoyed, nicely done

haha, that is cute! i like poems that 'mislead' you :) and then turn out to be something funny and innocent! way to go! &D

Nice ! Creative, very well thought-out. Learn from this person, kiddies !

Great twist at the end!

LOL! Good way to fool us all! I had the vision of some heart doctor, hehe :) Great work!

Keep writing!

Jelly donuts! I love them, except I usually stuff 'em all in my mouth! Great ending :D

It fooled me. Funny, keep writing : )

Hilarious! That really had me fooled. Gj!

LOL man! for me it was a cake! :D

Bravo..LOL...Loved it!

Cute! At first I thought it was some doctor operating on someone until the last line. It's good!

*falls anime style*

Well, that caught me off guard! _

Heart of the Sword

it should have been a real.

u got me all excited and got my hopes up and then u crushed me with the doughnut!

lol! Good surprise ending!

haha... that was cool... _

i like jelly doughnuts! hehe