|Reviews for Helpless Victim|
| not sure yet 8/3/03 . chapter 1
lmao, definitely not expected and very cute, muchly enjoyed, nicely done
| joie 610 8/2/03 . chapter 1
haha, that is cute! i like poems that 'mislead' you :) and then turn out to be something funny and innocent! way to go! &D
| handle187 7/31/03 . chapter 1
Nice ! Creative, very well thought-out. Learn from this person, kiddies !
| Free-Writer 7/30/03 . chapter 1
Great twist at the end!
| Anjeni Windsinger 7/29/03 . chapter 1
LOL! Good way to fool us all! I had the vision of some heart doctor, hehe :) Great work!
| Autumn tears 7/21/03 . chapter 1
Jelly donuts! I love them, except I usually stuff 'em all in my mouth! Great ending :D
| quietdrama22 7/21/03 . chapter 1
It fooled me. Funny, keep writing : )
| lebuffle 7/19/03 . chapter 1
Hilarious! That really had me fooled. Gj!
| mizu no kokoro 7/18/03 . chapter 1
LOL man! for me it was a cake! :D
| Needa S 7/18/03 . chapter 1
| teh tarik 7/18/03 . chapter 1
Cute! At first I thought it was some doctor operating on someone until the last line. It's good!
| Keep it 100 7/17/03 . chapter 1
*falls anime style*
Well, that caught me off guard! _
Heart of the Sword
| tiger 7/17/03 . chapter 1
it should have been a real.
u got me all excited and got my hopes up and then u crushed me with the doughnut!
| Falling Stars 7/17/03 . chapter 1
lol! Good surprise ending!
| Kumo Okano 7/17/03 . chapter 1
haha... that was cool... _
i like jelly doughnuts! hehe