 NeWriter 2003-07-17 . chapter 1This poem was quite shocking in a kind of good way. It was good how you show here that there´s no cure to it and that it isn´t worth to be in love. But what about the POSITIVE stuff?? The feeling of being cared for, loved and the secureness that comes with it. I think if you put like a both way argument it would be even better. But I still loved this. The argument and reasons are pretty well. Though I could answer most of the questions myself... hehehe. Great poem! Well done =) |